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Interplay of Flame and Ice

Amidst an orange moon which brightens the chill of evening... when armada of snow in a free-fall drapes the lanes as night recoils: Yet, menfolk gather in a bonfire kindled with calm-- for just one flame in heaven's dome imbues that a certain assurance can pierce a bitter gust when darkness falls. Tender grace endures as a lone star flickers while the canopy of frost trembles to blanket old hills like an iced lattice climbing edge on edge and ridge on ridge: and though dazzling crowns of peaks etch iced crystals near westward's reach- the smoldering embers of hope abide. From a distance, I watch this mystery, this interplay of flame and cold where time mirrors the shift of beauty as a pool of winter sways with the kiln of man's vigor and his moon, allowing near capped byways to glimmer alongside human's virtue that joins a snowy flow. Contest of Anthony Slausen: Embers and Snowflakes 1/5/2018

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Date: 1/9/2018 9:46:00 AM
Great. I enjoyed this and join the snowy flow. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 1/7/2018 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,Nette , beautiful write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/6/2018 3:24:00 PM
Delightful poem. Congrats, nette.
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Date: 1/6/2018 1:09:00 PM
Nette, an enthralling and enticing write. Gorgeous content illuminated by your brilliant imagery. Congratulations for your excellent placement in the contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/5/2018 9:29:00 AM
Wow Nette... Some amazing lines in this, and it starts with the first one... The imagery is just brilliant...
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Date: 1/5/2018 4:53:00 AM
If I may say! I very beautiful Canadian like poem!
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Date: 1/4/2018 3:42:00 PM
He is sure to like your poem Nette. It enthralls! : )
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Date: 1/4/2018 3:13:00 PM
An impeccable depiction of both the opposite and similarity between fire and ice using snow as the literary hook. Your poem is a tough act to follow!
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Date: 1/4/2018 2:58:00 PM
Wow nette, this is amazing
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Date: 1/4/2018 2:51:00 PM
- This is wonderful to read, Nette - Another 1st place ... (in my eyes) and it's well deserved - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2018 2:48:00 PM
I enjoyed the scenery in your poem, nette. A contrast of bonfire and snow masterfully depicted..best for a win!
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