Internal Pain

We go through life dealing with Pain 
inside yet we paint a Picture to a 
public figure of a Head raised high.

Emotional torture and Thunderous 
cries from a screaming Heart 
echoing deep down inside.

You get on your knees to clasp your 
hands and pray to pour out your 
mind asking to take the pain away.

Heartache comes in many different 
shapes at unknown levels from any 
angle words can not convey.

You fight Internal Battles everyday of 
your life armed with only your whit 
and your pride to defeat those 
Demons that lurk inside.

You take a deep breath and release 
an Earth trembling yell telling your 
inner Demons and others that have 
hurt you GO BACK TO HELL , INSIDE 
OF MY HEART AND INSIDE OF MY 
MIND YOU'LL HAVE NO PLACE TO 
DWELL ! ™©

The Moral of this Poem is never let 
anything or anyone for that matter 
get the best of you in any shape, 
way, or form. Above all never let 
these entities get the satisfaction of 
your tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/29/2014 3:08:00 PM
Hi Shawn, pain is loyal...we can always count on it being there to test our resolve, I thrive on it...Thanks for the reminder...rgds, Thabang
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 12/29/2014 8:42:00 PM
You're very welcome
Date: 12/30/2013 11:49:00 AM
Love this! I can relate to this on so many levels...thx for stopping by as well ????
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 12/30/2013 12:51:00 PM
You are very welcome Spring Marsh and thank you for stopping by hope you enjoy my other poems.
Date: 11/11/2013 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Shawn
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 11/11/2013 9:46:00 PM
Just saw which contest thanks again.
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 11/11/2013 9:21:00 PM
The win ? Gotta check this out lol but ty
Date: 11/10/2013 9:31:00 PM
Shawn... Congratulations, thanks for the support..... ~SKAT~ LOVE
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 11/11/2013 9:19:00 PM
Ty and your welcome
Date: 11/3/2013 4:33:00 AM
So far my favorite with a good point.
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Date: 11/2/2013 11:14:00 PM
Hello Shawn, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 11/3/2013 4:23:00 AM
Ty hun i didn't even know that.
Date: 10/26/2013 7:38:00 PM
hi Shawn, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 10/27/2013 4:54:00 AM
Sounds good thanks for the love
Date: 10/26/2013 4:28:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Shawn ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 10/26/2013 8:34:00 AM
Many thanks Anne. I'm sure i will.
Date: 10/26/2013 12:29:00 AM
such deep poem.... Shawn, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 10/26/2013 2:46:00 AM
Thank you for your feed back and welcome. Thats cool with me. What would you like to know ?
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