Internal Momentum Shudder

everything is a division lol is it my mission to balance the scales

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/29/2018 6:34:00 AM

Balance it delicately then, my padawan grasshopper friend. Smooth butter poetry, Sand B. It melts in the heart perfectly. Love and joy always.

Sand Blown
Date: 9/15/2018 6:19:00 PM

you are most generous...my write was a reflection of my dali clock balanced on a lab weigh scale

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/26/2018 12:35:00 PM

The scales of perpetual motion...held in your verse, SB...love & balance...^WW^

Sand Blown
Date: 8/26/2018 2:10:00 PM

good phrasing 'perpetual motion'

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/25/2018 7:02:00 AM

Poems that make you go hmmmm

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/25/2018 10:50:00 PM

Stillness a human construct ;)

Sand Blown
Date: 8/25/2018 6:08:00 PM

hmmm is right...in a sense consciousness is all there is and the world is like unto the interior of a lava lamp in continual motion...though we 'try' to stand still