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Internal Conflict

Brain splitting in two
The mind in constant fission 
To sever the fruit

Consciousness fading
The mind is put asunder 
A crack is shaping

Internal conflict 
My mind afflicted and awhirl 
Oh the need to rest

Confining the eyes
Drift away on silent wings
A better day nears

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Tom Woody

Date: 9/13/2023 2:38:00 PM

Interesting senryus mug. I luv bugz!

Mug Bug
Date: 9/13/2023 6:53:00 PM

Thank you ^^

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/12/2023 5:04:00 PM

Sometimes, it's best to let conflicting thoughts "drift away on silent wings." Take a deep breath and embrace a tender moment. My best to you, Mug Bug. ** Cool name, btw ** :) Brandy

Mug Bug
Date: 3/12/2023 7:47:00 PM

aww thank you so much **yes hahaha, its an old childhood nickname** ^^