Intermission

Performer spies a boy nearly asleep;
  “Look,” he calls out; sitting duck’s
     body shakes with laughter.

4/13/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Chuuk Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 8:42 PM
Oh this got me smiling and remembering when I fell asleep in church. It was embarrassing. Lol. Good one Kim.
Kendrick Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 3:53 PM
Good one. I enjoyed reading it today. I wonder if the boy got wide awake. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 6:15 PM
He was awake after that…the play was a bit too long.
Baker Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 2:41 PM
Interesting form for this one, Kim. I like it! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 2:45 PM
Thank you, Bill!
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