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Performer spies a boy nearly asleep; “Look,” he calls out; sitting duck’s body shakes with laughter. 4/13/2023

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Date: 4/13/2023 8:42:00 PM
Oh this got me smiling and remembering when I fell asleep in church. It was embarrassing. Lol. Good one Kim.
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Date: 4/13/2023 3:53:00 PM
Good one. I enjoyed reading it today. I wonder if the boy got wide awake. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2023 6:15:00 PM
He was awake after that…the play was a bit too long.
Date: 4/13/2023 2:41:00 PM
Interesting form for this one, Kim. I like it! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2023 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!

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