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Summer spells are sweet but fleeting
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I was dazzled - in a summer spell - did we both name it as special? Was it the summer freedom - the sparkling lake that summoned magic? The constant sun sent a subliminal message with its rise and fall. It won’t last, it said, there's an expiration date approaching fast. The short-lived summer proved a brief, insubstantial memory making.

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Date: 10/2/2020 1:08:00 PM
That summoned magic may not be great for making memories, but history shows it is great for making children! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/2/2020 2:57:00 PM
ha ha ha ha.. no, no no... no. =]
Date: 10/2/2020 5:11:00 AM
Those fleeting moments under the summer sun (or even better, the summer moon) will make memories, substantial memories, that will last a lifetime. I cherish those memories and write about them often. My latest poem recalls such memories.
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