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Interminable

interminable

grows the time when someone says . . .

just a moment please

 
July 22, 2020 for the Just A Moment Poetry Contest of John Lawless

timesenryu

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/5/2020 10:15:00 PM

So true! Short, sweet and definitely to the point! Brings a smile to the face. Congrats and kudos!

John Watt

Date: 8/4/2020 3:24:00 PM

I love it, short and to the point, and so true of modern society, especially phone recordings. Easy to relate to the frustration behind this. "Your call is important to us" now translates, "We don't give a moose's elbow how long you have to wait". Congrats on your win!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/4/2020 12:52:00 PM

A relatable experience Andrea. This is really witty and honest. Congratulations on your win! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/4/2020 6:30:00 AM

lol ~ we can all relate. Well penned, Andrea. Congrats on your win ~

John Lawless

Date: 8/4/2020 5:45:00 AM

...and then that annoying voice that keeps telling you how "important" your call is to them......Nice little senryu her Andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2020 2:49:00 AM

The recorded messages bother me the most. Then after you wait a very long time you get disconnected. Happens all the time. This is a perfect entry for his contest. xxoo