Interludes of Solitude

In dreams I'm offered interludes of solitude
where worries are calmed in total quietude
I'm swimming in the depths of a placid night
so don't wake me from my whimsical flight
I'm in still waters, where lotus flowers grow
It's soothing to be among their saffron glow

I'm being gently lulled by the motion of waves
Serenity is the healer that my psyche craves
I find soft glimmers of repose and satisfaction
away from the world's dark fretful distraction
In these moments my heart has sweet release
while I drift along in some semblance of peace

In dreams time stands completely still, so I laze
contentedly floating while my eyes stargaze
Flickering fireflies generously luminate my way
Within these solitary intervals, I wish to stay
I've been told that I'm frivolous to waste time
but dreaming is an indulgence I find sublime



Just a Moment Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Lawless
Posted on July 28th, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 12:02 AM
This is just gorgeous writing, Jenna, so quieting and serene. Congrats on your win ~ John
Mcintosh Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 7:39 AM
A beautiful poem... filled with enchanting thoughts and whispers of gentle compassion. I enjoyed it so much. God bless you and CONGRATS on your win
Logan Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 3:26 PM
Your generous comments are always delightful, Regina. Thank you.
Hamilton Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 7:21 AM
A wonderful write Jenna, this time gets a top win, congrats!
Logan Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 3:26 PM
Thanks for recognizing this one by placing it in your contest, John. How kind that you offer N/As a second chance.
Canerdy Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 7:23 AM
Being in such a wonderful state would be anything BUT a waste of time. Jenna, this poem is vividly descriptive and absolutely LOVELY! Janice
Logan Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 7:25 AM
Thanks so much for your kind remarks, Janice. They're very welcomed.
Leffanta Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 12:10 PM
Roy Orbison's, "In Dreams"? was one of my late wife's favourites. How fortunate we are to be able to dream in all the lockdown time available! Well caught and scribed, Jenna! Aloha! Rico
Logan Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 7:24 AM
That song is a perfect pairing for my lines, Rico. "I close my eyes and drift away..." Dreaming is free and we've lots of time to dream away. Thanks for leaving me with your thoughts, and now the words of that song. :)
Gondolf Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 5:57 AM
If it wasn't for those sweet reveries I think I would have gone crazy by now. Nicely written, Jenna, this poem had a very calming feel to me. Best of luck in the contest, looks like you got it posted just in time. Hugs, John
Logan Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 7:21 AM
It was one of the last entries, but I've been a bit busy with other things lately. Thank you for always being supportive of my writing, John.
Koplin Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 2:32 PM
I do love dreaming. You are very talented!! Wow Jenna! Great work
Logan Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Thanks so much for your generous thoughts and compliment, Mark. I appreciate your kindness. :)
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