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Interludes of Solitude

In dreams I'm offered interludes of solitude where worries are calmed in total quietude I'm swimming in the depths of a placid night so don't wake me from my whimsical flight I'm in still waters, where lotus flowers grow It's soothing to be among their saffron glow I'm being gently lulled by the motion of waves Serenity is the healer that my psyche craves I find soft glimmers of repose and satisfaction away from the world's dark fretful distraction In these moments my heart has sweet release while I drift along in some semblance of peace In dreams time stands completely still, so I laze contentedly floating while my eyes stargaze Flickering fireflies generously luminate my way Within these solitary intervals, I wish to stay I've been told that I'm frivolous to waste time but dreaming is an indulgence I find sublime Just a Moment Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Lawless Posted on July 28th, 2020

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Date: 10/2/2020 12:02:00 AM
This is just gorgeous writing, Jenna, so quieting and serene. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 10/1/2020 7:39:00 AM
A beautiful poem... filled with enchanting thoughts and whispers of gentle compassion. I enjoyed it so much. God bless you and CONGRATS on your win
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/1/2020 3:26:00 PM
Your generous comments are always delightful, Regina. Thank you.
Date: 10/1/2020 7:21:00 AM
A wonderful write Jenna, this time gets a top win, congrats!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/1/2020 3:26:00 PM
Thanks for recognizing this one by placing it in your contest, John. How kind that you offer N/As a second chance.
Date: 7/30/2020 7:23:00 AM
Being in such a wonderful state would be anything BUT a waste of time. Jenna, this poem is vividly descriptive and absolutely LOVELY! Janice
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/30/2020 7:25:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind remarks, Janice. They're very welcomed.
Date: 7/29/2020 12:10:00 PM
Roy Orbison's, "In Dreams"? was one of my late wife's favourites. How fortunate we are to be able to dream in all the lockdown time available! Well caught and scribed, Jenna! Aloha! Rico
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/30/2020 7:24:00 AM
That song is a perfect pairing for my lines, Rico. "I close my eyes and drift away..." Dreaming is free and we've lots of time to dream away. Thanks for leaving me with your thoughts, and now the words of that song. :)
Date: 7/29/2020 5:57:00 AM
If it wasn't for those sweet reveries I think I would have gone crazy by now. Nicely written, Jenna, this poem had a very calming feel to me. Best of luck in the contest, looks like you got it posted just in time. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/30/2020 7:21:00 AM
It was one of the last entries, but I've been a bit busy with other things lately. Thank you for always being supportive of my writing, John.
Date: 7/28/2020 2:32:00 PM
I do love dreaming. You are very talented!! Wow Jenna! Great work
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/28/2020 4:10:00 PM
Thanks so much for your generous thoughts and compliment, Mark. I appreciate your kindness. :)

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