Interloper

Look to the outside, look within, The penciling trees, the straw of the sun, Skin white as milk, cheeks turn to cherries, The gaze falls deeper within. No more shall this stranger taunt me, Its eyes glistening with the deep bordeaux of blood, In which moment the heart begins to bleed, Consciousness lost in the reflection of another. Its palms gently caress its cheeks, Mirroring my every move, my every breath, A sheeny droplet passes down its complexion, Yet I feel the sadness bound in my heart. And still it stares, trapped before me, Hands gripping the nearby porcelain vase, Eyes lustrous, almost mad, It sends the delicate prop against the cold surface. Crimson, scarlet streams descend gently, It still stares - bewildered and dazed, Both our hands seen only through thick brooks of ruby, And a smile appears. Hello stranger, The soul within remains unchanged, Our gaze saunters and with a final glance of approval, I turn and gait forth, sensing no more the bothering embodiment.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A  Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 12:13 PM
great write
Augustus Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 10:14 PM
Congratulations on your first place finish. I found it to be the type of poem that should be spoken word. Definitely said aloud! Very nice!
Farese Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 12:42 AM
Congrats and this is a lovely poem :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 4:51 PM
Very cool poem. Great imagery. And congrats on your top win.
Long Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 11:47 AM
congrats on your win with this gem. cory
Richards Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 8:53 AM
Amazing and introspective....a wonderful winning poem. Congratulations, Martina!
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 5:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's "Mirror" contest Martina. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 1:10 AM
Congratulations on your winx
Dillard Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 9:48 PM
Martina, I enjoyed your work. Congratulations on your first place with this poem. May there be many more. RAY
Sherman Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 3:59 PM
Congrats on an awesome win!! Great work of art!
Song Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 1:47 PM
Outstanding write, Martina. Glowingly great. A deserving first place win! Gwendolen
Caliri Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 1:19 PM
Congratulations on first place in my mirror contest! It was very gripping. Soon as I read it I knew it was the best.
Prophet Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 1:35 PM
Goodness! Thank you so much!
Doland Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 3:13 PM
That was really good, and it says alot.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace