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Written on June, 6th 2025 for Ink Empress's Etheree of your Heart Poetry Contest.

hope flowing abundance unbreakable embattled walls cease perish with loves embrace under unfathomable beauty blanketed in moon's glow I fall into blissful surrender serenity serenades through your voice heralding a scarred heart's resurrection trails of bright cosmic dust scattering streaking the night kissed horizon wrapping around trembling arms scents of vintage leather rain soaked petrichor two hearts in sync interlaced become one

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Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/27/2025 8:08:00 PM

I love how this poem just flows with calm and hope—feels like sinking into something really comforting and real. The mix of cosmic vibes and cozy smells is such a nice touch!

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/21/2025 7:54:00 AM

Dear Sara, congratulations for your success in Ink's contest. The emotions expressed in your poem is conveyed so beautifully with mesmerizing yet vibrant imagery that soothes/satisfies the soul but quickens the heartbeat. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sara Jama
Date: 6/26/2025 8:55:00 AM

Thank you so much for the kind words.

Ink Empress

Date: 6/21/2025 2:31:00 AM

Dear sara, you can write light or anything you want just effortlessly! I love the depth of your poem here and what it depicts and how youv painted imagery while sticking to syllables and ensuring that you deliver exactly what you want to. So many lines stood out for me especially “streaking the night kissed horizon wrapping around trembling arms scents of vintage leather” so beautiful! Could see through your descriptive lines! Pleasure reading your take! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations

Sara Jama
Date: 6/26/2025 8:54:00 AM

Thank you for placing me in your contest Ink.