Interlaced

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Written on June, 6th 2025 for Ink Empress's Etheree of your Heart Poetry Contest.

hope
flowing 
abundance 
unbreakable 
embattled walls cease
perish with loves embrace
under unfathomable 
beauty blanketed in moon's glow
I fall into blissful surrender 
serenity serenades through your voice
heralding a scarred heart's resurrection 
trails of bright cosmic dust scattering 
streaking the night kissed horizon
wrapping around trembling arms
scents of vintage leather
rain soaked petrichor
two hearts in sync
interlaced 
become
one

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Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/27/2025 8:08:00 PM

I love how this poem just flows with calm and hope—feels like sinking into something really comforting and real. The mix of cosmic vibes and cozy smells is such a nice touch!

Sara Jama
Date: 8/7/2025 12:36:00 PM

Thank you very much for the kind feedback.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/21/2025 7:54:00 AM

Dear Sara, congratulations for your success in Ink's contest. The emotions expressed in your poem is conveyed so beautifully with mesmerizing yet vibrant imagery that soothes/satisfies the soul but quickens the heartbeat. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sara Jama
Date: 6/26/2025 8:55:00 AM

Thank you so much for the kind words.

Ink Empress

Date: 6/21/2025 2:31:00 AM

Dear sara, you can write light or anything you want just effortlessly! I love the depth of your poem here and what it depicts and how youv painted imagery while sticking to syllables and ensuring that you deliver exactly what you want to. So many lines stood out for me especially “streaking the night kissed horizon wrapping around trembling arms scents of vintage leather” so beautiful! Could see through your descriptive lines! Pleasure reading your take! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations

Sara Jama
Date: 6/26/2025 8:54:00 AM

Thank you for placing me in your contest Ink.