Interesting

Curiosity was aroused,
When interest got involved,
Thought paid attention to detail,
But had a problem and blamed fascination,	
Attraction said that he believed in intrigue,
But it could’ve been captivations fault,
Just causing trouble!
Until excitement became too spellbinding,
Making everything tantalizing,
Tempting to lure, entrap and charm,
Get a grip said stimulation,
Before you become too enthusiastic,
Don’t show off your eagerness,
Or willingness for warmth and passion,
You will create a friction,
Vigours appetite got very hungry,
Wanting more stamina,
Sparkled for awhile,
But only for attention,
Started fitness training for power,
Until radiance blazed,
Thinking he was flash,
Causing a flame between them,
Attractiveness became amused,
Started entertaining,
But only out of compulsion,
He became to engrossed,
It was all very gripping and thrilling,
Everything worked out in the end,
Because exhilaration,
Made everybody happy.

25/09/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 9/27/2016 2:39:00 PM
Wendy-lovely poem :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/27/2016 2:41:00 PM
Thank you laura x very kind of you xxxx
Date: 9/27/2016 1:13:00 PM
What a wonderful "play on, and with, words" this is. Great job Wendy and a very unique take on the theme. thanks for entering the contest
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/27/2016 1:27:00 PM
Thank you, John, I really enjoyed it too, I think my brain had a melt down x
Date: 9/27/2016 1:13:00 PM
Enjoyed the energy in your poem, Wendy, with a great build up of anticipation! Congrats on your win :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/27/2016 1:29:00 PM
Thank you, Laura x
Date: 9/27/2016 11:40:00 AM
Interesting! :)) Sunita
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Date: 9/27/2016 11:38:00 AM
Yes! The wheel of speculation at work here. The vulnerable will suffer. Good stuff. INTERESTING. Love, daver
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Date: 9/27/2016 9:02:00 AM
Hi Wendy, I enjoyed your take on the contest theme. Great job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/27/2016 8:54:00 AM
Wendy, this is brilliant. Janice
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Date: 9/26/2016 1:48:00 PM
I like it.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/26/2016 5:27:00 PM
Thank you james
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