Intercession

I say the wrong things
My obsession is to blame~~~
Let heart intercede

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcintosh Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 12:05 PM
It's easy to blame, yes ~ so easy to blame, much better to let the heart intercede as you say - Excellent poem. I love it. Happy Writing and God Bless You.
Manassian Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 12:08 PM
Thanks, Regina. Kind of you to visit and leave a little gift for me. Bless you too, my dear. Hugs
Horsman Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 3:37 PM
i believe the first, one says in most situations comes straight from the heart''' even poetry, sometimes when going back in there, especially to hopefully improve it, does not auger well with the sentiment, although may to the purist,,,i like what you write simple as that,,and i like because it comes from within, something not even education can place there..far too much manufacture feelings and in poetry into days world,,i know the genuine article, Eileen, and your poetry certainly is that....
Manassian Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 12:07 PM
Harry...you encourage me to keep writing. This post of yours, about leaving things as is and letting the original intent of the heart come through, whether in words or in writing has touched my heart. Thank you for your kindness to me, Harry. Don't stay away so long. Hugs
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August 6, 2014 at 12:56 PM
Thanks for writing this for me:) joking, It does sound like you wrote it for me, even though I know better. I just wrote a Haiki frenzy the other day but, only posted one. Only read it if you know or like CG Jung.
Manassian Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 2:14 PM
Thanks for reading, JS. I'm a very emotional person...and very honest. I wish I weren't at times. Anyway...I did read your CG Jung...and since I didn't want to sound ignorant, I didn't comment. Don't know who he is....Sorry!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 9:12 AM
The tongue is indeed a hard thing to tame. Fortunately you have mastered your pen.
Manassian Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Thanks, Richard. My pen tends to be unruly as well. Perhaps they both need a rest....
Khan Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 4:26 AM
That's good write! Stay Blessed!:)
Manassian Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 2:12 PM
Thanks, Saba. Will be your way soon! :)
Bordner Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 8:53 PM
This is a very pretty write Eileen...J.A.B.
Manassian Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 1:58 AM
I like pretty! It is such a PRETTY WORD! :) Thanks, Justin. You always know what to write.
Chircop Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 3:55 PM
I can see me there in this senryu saying the wrong things without thought..but the dum tek tek of my heart.Enjoyed this senryu dear .
Manassian Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 1:57 AM
Thanks, my sweet. You and I seem to have a lot in common....Kindred spirits of a sort. Love ya!
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