Intent Is Nine Tenths of the Plot

medium's the page look at me toe tied to a line MagiCicada 13

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/1/2018 8:20:00 PM

Clever as ever, my dear. :) gw

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/25/2018 6:57:00 AM

I have been here, and it is sometimes better to break the line, and start over completely later.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/25/2018 7:59:00 AM

Toeing the line! That's one interpretation ;) love it. xomo!

Lyric Man

Date: 6/23/2018 11:26:00 PM

Such a cleverly penned write, Maureen!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/24/2018 11:23:00 AM

Thank you Lyric Man :) xomo!

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/23/2018 4:40:00 PM

A kawanagi comment... .................................................................................... secret fishing line... baited with words of wisdom... barbless is the hook... ...................................................................................... © Mick E TALBOT

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/24/2018 7:29:00 AM

You GOT me hook line and sinker ;) I love it Mick! xomo <3

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/23/2018 2:59:00 PM

Charming all the way dearest, Maureen! Your later style is witty and exciting!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/24/2018 11:27:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios :) very kind of you too say. Me thinks it's the extra oxygen, quit smoking ;) Love and hugs xomo <3

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/23/2018 2:57:00 PM

Better to hang by a toe than one's neck:) Love the humor, Mo! Hope you are having a wonderful weekend!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/24/2018 11:28:00 AM

Lol! Harder to holler to be let go caught by your neck instead of your toe! ;) xomo