Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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Crows are scavengers

                     ... they eat dog poop in my garden every day

                     When I bring my shovel and bag they scream :
  
                                ... "we want more .... more" ...

                                          ... they love it

                                               A crow

                               will fight over a dead man's flesh

                                But, stay away from my garden








07.06.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Jennifer Proxenos June 9, 2019 at 10:01 AM Crows - ugly birds , but nevertheless necessary for the cycle of life - tell them to shoo, shoo! Hugs, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2019 at 1:07 PM - Shoo, shoo, shoo, shoo :))) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, dear Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole June 8, 2019 at 1:46 PM Anne, you are very smart. Never let anyone or anything destroy your Garden. Only beautiful flowers belong there. :) Brandy Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2019 at 2:04 PM - Many thanks, Brandy ... yes, flowers like you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2019 at 10:03 AM that ending sounded almost onimous!! ARe you hiding bodies in your garden? haha!! I really enjoyed this one! Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2019 at 12:03 PM - No, only poop from my dogs ... but crows are scavengers and eat your body with pleasure ... alive or dead, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2019 at 7:38 AM Be warned crows!! Eeks! Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2019 at 12:30 PM - Nasty black birds, Kim :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham June 8, 2019 at 5:29 AM A shotgun will sort 'them' out lol. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2019 at 12:28 PM - Thank you for your good advice, Tom :) - I will first try with an old-fashioned "scarecrow" in the shape of a human :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman June 7, 2019 at 4:44 PM They go for the eyes first, or if able hold a pen, write rubbish...love this poem and your poetry,,, Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2019 at 12:21 PM - A lot of rubbish, Harry :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit June 7, 2019 at 2:24 PM That photo evokes icky feeling..you captured it in your poem, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2019 at 2:44 PM - Nature's comfort reminds us that life is moving, that security is a fantasy, and that we must accept the changes we face in life, Vijay :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison June 7, 2019 at 2:24 PM yeuk yeuk and double yeuk lol:-) Good on you Anne-Lise more than person one can sling poop I just write it lol!:-)hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2019 at 2:40 PM - Nature's ability to create balance is absolutely tremendous, Jan ... - Many thanks for the nice comment : "yeuk yeuk and double yeuk" :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)