Intended's

(Ellis and Julia Bland)


We strode along the silvery sands, 
to the clandestine cove, found of alabaster
The moon shone brightly upon our hands ~
As our feet-- tides of blue gently rushed over.
Our hearts embraced by a sweet chant
‘Though, no words were ever uttered
In this place -- only for lovers meant…
Complete, we swayed with each other.





Comments: Here is to wishing you, my dear cousins 52 more years of wedded bliss
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Anish Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 11:08 AM
Nice tribute to you relatives - especially like the part about the "clandestine cove".
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November 29, 2008 at 12:56 PM
There are times when action speaks much louder than words. The essence of this poem is just touching. It flows very well and brings out the sincerity of true love. Great job! ~Joseph
Strand Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 11:30 PM
Beautiful words Adell..loved this image ' tides of blue gently rushed 'Rgds Brian & thanks for your very welcome comments
Mason Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 4:58 PM
Well, thank you Adell for sharing this wonderful gift with us here at PoetrySoup. I imagine your cousins were very moved by this beautiful writing. I just love the title which compliments the whole thing!!
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November 8, 2008 at 5:19 PM
Wonderful dedication. Nice use of imagery in this poem. Enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing! Karen
Torres Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 10:55 PM
Very sweet and wonderful. Great wishes to your cousins. blessings Michael Torres
White Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 8:19 PM
congrats to your cousins, gret tribute, take care D-ncye
Winter Avatar
November 1, 2008 at 12:17 PM
Oh this is indeed a gift. I would frame it were it for me and my love. Beautifully enchanting and magical. Congrats and warm wishes to the happy and lucky couple. love, Shar
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November 1, 2008 at 10:31 AM
Oh, I like this. Wonderfully romantic and enchantingly descriptive. I want to go to this place! Beautiful poetry Adell. Love, Nigel ~~~ and best wishes to your cousins.
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