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Intellitard

Intellitard Fortified and guarded skeptical little fool, swimming in the deep end of a shallow pool. Industrious and luxurious, successful so it seems, working silently all alone but for the wrong team. Paranoid and departed mysterious little foe, the Mr. behind the glasses in the corner all alone. Serious yet hilarious, a captivating sort of scene, From the decorated Hero to the gutters Dope Fiends. Intelligently so retarded bad mental chemistry, the smartest dumb person throughout all history. bmdavey@ 02/23/16

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Date: 2/24/2016 10:40:00 PM
Very inventive. I think I've known a few ot these "intellitards" of whom you speak. "swimming in the deep end of a shallow pool" << this is a killer line, my friend.
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Date: 2/24/2016 11:26:00 PM
Thank you I try to be original in my phrasing but sometimes I think I will be the only person to understand it...well all of you here in the Soup have proved that wrong because most of you are spot on most of the time! Thanks again my friend

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