Brian Davey Poet Rhyme

Intellitard

Intellitard



                           Fortified and guarded skeptical little fool,
                         swimming in the deep end of a shallow pool.

                       Industrious and luxurious, successful so it seems, 
                        working silently all alone but for the wrong team.

                           Paranoid and departed mysterious little foe,
                       the Mr. behind the glasses in the corner all alone.

                        Serious yet hilarious, a captivating sort of scene,
                      From the decorated Hero to the gutters Dope Fiends.

                          Intelligently so retarded bad mental chemistry,
                         the smartest dumb person throughout all history.



bmdavey@
02/23/16

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Timothy Hicks February 24, 2016 at 10:40 PM Very inventive. I think I've known a few ot these "intellitards" of whom you speak. "swimming in the deep end of a shallow pool" << this is a killer line, my friend. Brian Davey February 24, 2016 at 11:26 PM Thank you I try to be original in my phrasing but sometimes I think I will be the only person to understand it...well all of you here in the Soup have proved that wrong because most of you are spot on most of the time! Thanks again my friend