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Intellectual Debris

Aimlessly walking across the wasteland of your mind, you pick through the emotional trash with random intensity Crushed bottles of plastic thoughts; half drank, half spilled on dozens of bridal dresses Crushed cans of metal demands; hard lemonade speeches, soft wine cooler caresses And betrothed napkins blow away in the wind Rusted pennies for your thoughts lay strewn on the sidewalk, as you pick through the mental dumpster with no sense of urgency Scattering everywhere your intellectual debris You find a good pair of glasses of never used honesty Though you can see your true feelings better now, you still try not to think too ostensibly Walking with a more focused purpose, still with your eyes looking down and selectively looking around For what? You’re still not quite sure As you stroll, traversing the ruins of your mind, you’re certain of one thing: Beneath every barren ground, there’s a treasure trove of doubt waiting to be found

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/9/2022 6:12:00 PM
Wonderfully written Freddie. The sad beautiful metaphors of self doubt combined with wonderful well thought out lines, create emotional upheaval in this great write. I especially like the last four lines. When you set out to read a few poems, you find some nice ones and some that are less than what you hoped for but finding one like this makes it worth the search Freddie. "hard lemonade speeches, soft wine cooler caresses" What a creative line.
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Date: 10/21/2017 8:30:00 AM
Imagery abounds! The various drinks, picking through the mental dumpster. Yours is a mind always hard at work, my friend!
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