Insufficient

What an injustice!
To describe you using only words,
a task that can only be completed,
by insulting you greatly.
So please forgive me,
as I blunder on.

You remind me of a candle,
when you are around, you bring,
just a little more brightness to life.

You remind me of a book,
with such interesting stories,
to spin to me.

You remind me of music,
you can change a mood
with just a few simple words.

You see what I mean?
I put my pen to paper, and,
this rubbish spews forth!
So I'll stop trying to write.
I am so very sorry,
that I think you are so spiffy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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