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Knife and pen, both should be warned, Tools of deed and death, Heart and life, they were scavenged, By any means, please keep your faith, Perhaps, you can dream like Creath.

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Date: 2/21/2019 2:57:00 PM
A kitten for Christmas, what more is there? There is a special magic and excitement in the air on Christmas morning! Anything is possible! Very cute!
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Date: 2/21/2019 2:44:00 PM
I related to so much of this being from a small town. I loved your witty descriptions and at all times, there is love and self love! Different lifestyle from some, but all the ingredients for a average to great life. I felt nostalgic for the scout I high centered in the irrigation ditch! Wow! This was heartwarming and entertaining!
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Luqman Samin
Date: 3/3/2019 10:43:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate this. I meant to make this poem an experiment for my English grammar. At least, this poem is not extinct.

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