Institution

My thoughts are illusions. A life of delusion. Searching for absolution But having no resolution. Despite being human I gave no contribution. I await my execution In this morbid institution.

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/6/2016 2:43:00 PM

nice one Lisa, really well written, love your rhyme and welcome to PS, hope you love it here. God bless, Gordon

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/31/2016 5:03:00 AM

Well done, very honest. Great write, Lisa. Welcome to the soup. I hope you feel as welcome as I did.

Sarah Jabri

Date: 1/31/2016 4:34:00 AM

This is BRILLIANT!!!!. Welcome to the soup Lisa. Can't wait to read more of your thoughts. See you around Lisa :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2016 12:29:00 AM

Hi Lisa, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 1/30/2016 10:05:00 PM

Lisa,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Lisa Sim
Date: 1/30/2016 10:12:00 PM

Hahaha! Thank you for the kind words! I've read your poem "Broken" and absolutely love it! I'm 13 and love writing poetry and drawing. I would also love to be your poetry soup friend! *Hugs back*