Andrea Dietrich Poet Fibonacci

Instinctual

Just 

like

penguins

that know when

to leave the sea and
 
make that long cold march that leads them 

to their mate, I too am drawn from all security,

with no questioning, to begin the journey that I know will surely lead me to you.


Inspired by the movie "March of the Penguins" and 
the Fibonacci Poetry Contest of rob carmack

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Monterey Sirak March 21, 2015 at 8:23 AM Wow! Such an original way to describe following your heart's desire, like being pulled along by an invisible cord.

Joe Maverick March 21, 2015 at 2:53 AM This poem just 'reeks' of instink I can smell those fishy penguins from...from, well from a long way off anyways..' And that's not (fibbing) though the poem is it seems Andrea,? I think you did very well in this indeed, I am wondering at this point wether I am ever going to comment on all your writes dear poet, I hope to make time at some point..'

Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2015 at 10:49 PM Andrea, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~

Connie Marcum Wong March 18, 2015 at 9:49 PM Congratulations on this winning poem that warms the heart. I love the way they search for that special pebble as their wedding gift. So cute!

Sara Kendrick March 18, 2015 at 9:11 AM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Richard Lamoureux March 18, 2015 at 9:02 AM It appears I am late to congratulate! Congratulations *lol*

Richard Lamoureux March 18, 2015 at 9:00 AM It seems you are on the right path. Good luck in the contest.

Kim Merryman March 17, 2015 at 5:29 PM I knew this one had to be high on the winner's list! Congrats on your win, Andrea! Love, Kim

Kp Nunez March 16, 2015 at 6:57 PM This is fabulous Andie! Congratulations!

Skat A March 15, 2015 at 11:49 PM ANDREA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT

Jack Horne March 15, 2015 at 4:53 PM beautiful write - so glad to see this was a winner

Joseph May March 15, 2015 at 12:15 PM Wonderful write Andrea...Congrats on your win..

Maurice Yvonne March 15, 2015 at 8:06 AM Congratulations!

Maurice Yvonne March 15, 2015 at 8:04 AM A georgeous poem. I adore it. If you need a friend to join you in that journey. I'd love to keep you warm on your walk. Always Armand!

Paul Callus March 15, 2015 at 7:49 AM Very creative, Andrea! You are a woman of faith...and no questions asked!! Congratulations on your win! [noted a comment about grammar!! Can Fibonacci be made up of 7 lines, because I have already seen 2 such ones among the top 4.]

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 15, 2015 at 7:16 AM Beautiful...instinctual...survival of all species, including mankind. God had a great plan, didn't he! Congratulations on your high placement in the contest. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Reason A. Poteet March 15, 2015 at 6:25 AM What a statement of love within the realm of the animal world. Worded well, Andrea. Kudos on your placement; congrats on your piece.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri March 15, 2015 at 4:32 AM Wow a nice structure in poem a style form new to me but u have surely crafted an awesome fibonacci and drawn the analogy in an appealing way btw penguins and the game of chance of luv., , following instincts eh. Nice to read u again. Take care.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 15, 2015 at 4:07 AM :) cute are the penguins but lovely is walk in a path where there we can find such security.. :) Congrats! thanks for the comments.. :) //olive eloisa

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 15, 2015 at 12:55 AM Wow Andrea it's so positively romantic ! Congrats on big win!

Arthur Vaso March 14, 2015 at 11:40 PM Wow, I loved this, so romantic!!!

Robert Johnson March 14, 2015 at 11:05 PM I love this style and you did awesome with it. Hope you're having a great weekend. Peace. :)

Eve Roper March 14, 2015 at 9:42 PM Andrea, I too saw that movie with my granddaughter and it was just wonderful. a 7 Blessings dear friend

Rob Carmack March 14, 2015 at 8:55 PM Andrea, thanks and congrats. The flow is excellent.

Francine Roberts March 14, 2015 at 8:42 PM aaah, that's so cute. and thanks for sneaking my poem into your winners list, I know you were only planning on placing 10, so much appreciated

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