Instilled

Cold 
Winter morn
Hoars frost upon
Star Magnolia shivers
Sun's up

Buds
Begin to set
Undaunted by 
The ice, snow, wind.. has hope
Spring comes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sabay Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 11:52 PM
Great poem, I like really like the way you transition. -Kevin Sabay
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March 18, 2010 at 11:17 AM
Absolutely beautiful. The second stanza is wonderful and has tremendous amount of energy and bright hopes to see the dawn of spring. 'Buds, begin to set, undaunted by, the ice, snow, wind.... has hope Spring comes' I really like it very much. Thanks and many thanks for your precious comments on Vasava 8 my friend. Best wishes and love......xxxxxx Ravindra...xxx Sara Ken
Freeman Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 6:11 PM
Lets hope spring is ready Sara. The cold has tried to hang on for the longest time this year. Smile. Agape, Moses
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March 17, 2010 at 11:12 AM
nicley penned, funny how the cold does not effect the english peas but would kill some things.
Knop Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 8:58 AM
Thank you for your comment on "Water of the Andes", Sara! Sometimes I am missing those fresh winds and crisp air of the Andes. But now we are welcoming spring and you did well with this!...Nice poem!...Gert
Goff Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 8:29 PM
oh, I love the artistic way you created this tight art, Sara! to mine favs! as Reuben would say! thanks for the witty comments, loved it! smiles! jimbo
Sweetheart Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 7:21 PM
Thankxxx for enjoying my poetry and your warm comments are most welcome Sara.. appreciate very much..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Beam Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 5:55 PM
thanks fo comment really enjoyed you continue also great write
Clark Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 5:16 AM
It is like turning on a light switch isn't it? The glory of SPRING!!!! Love Jeralynn
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March 16, 2010 at 5:08 AM
Hurry Hurry ... still raining more lightly now so hopefully Spring will start to surface too.. a lovely morning poem to read to begin my day Sara... vivid and visual picture from your gifted pen..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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