Instict and Old Age

Instinct And Old Age

Young dog that wanders not
From the launch of dream filled 
Moon call howls, it answers not
Sleeps alone, in carpet fields 
Threads of grass and dreams of young
Rabbits, cushions, long green
Drapes on windows, memory lost 
While widow wilts
Beside him
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 28, 2016 at 9:51 PM
William Blair, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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February 1, 2015 at 2:44 PM
WILLIAM, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Beautifully penned - I did find it quite a sad write:-( Hugs Jan xx
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January 27, 2015 at 3:38 AM
O yes a great write. Congrats on win William. God bless.Love>rajat
Relish Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 2:29 AM
great write... a poem worthy of the win... congrats.
Gorelick Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 9:04 PM
Just wonderful..this is truly poetry at its bet. Congrats. BG
Roper Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 4:50 PM
Congratulations on your win, William, and a 7. Blessings dear friend eve
Carmack Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 3:20 PM
This one, I loved the most. Congrats and thanks for participating.
Richards Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 2:59 PM
I love this so much !! What a sweet, delightful little poem! :) Congratulations !
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January 24, 2015 at 7:32 AM
William, this is deep. I feel and wilt like this poem. love it. a 7 :) have a nice day ~SKAT~
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