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Instict and Old Age

Instinct And Old Age Young dog that wanders not From the launch of dream filled Moon call howls, it answers not Sleeps alone, in carpet fields Threads of grass and dreams of young Rabbits, cushions, long green Drapes on windows, memory lost While widow wilts Beside him

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Date: 3/28/2016 9:51:00 PM
William Blair, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/1/2015 2:44:00 PM
WILLIAM, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:25:00 PM
Beautifully penned - I did find it quite a sad write:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/27/2015 3:38:00 AM
O yes a great write. Congrats on win William. God bless.Love>rajat
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Date: 1/27/2015 2:29:00 AM
great write... a poem worthy of the win... congrats.
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Date: 1/26/2015 9:04:00 PM
Just wonderful..this is truly poetry at its bet. Congrats. BG
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Date: 1/26/2015 4:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, William, and a 7. Blessings dear friend eve
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Date: 1/26/2015 3:20:00 PM
This one, I loved the most. Congrats and thanks for participating.
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Date: 1/26/2015 2:59:00 PM
I love this so much !! What a sweet, delightful little poem! :) Congratulations !
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Date: 1/24/2015 7:32:00 AM
William, this is deep. I feel and wilt like this poem. love it. a 7 :) have a nice day ~SKAT~
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