Instantly

Wings flutter as arrow aims

At first glance my heart was yours

Cupid's aim on my heart true

Instantly I fell





for Dr. Ram's "Winged Cupid" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 1:34 AM
I enjoyed seeing this one too.
Devonshire Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 9:31 AM
They're all great, Francine. Think this is my favorite though. Any of the three would make great entries. Hope to see one of your dodoitsu poems in Dr. Ram's winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
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March 15, 2011 at 8:35 PM
Now this one is grand Francine.. very visual portrait in words for the contest luv.. so if u enter this one .. great ..good luck...
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