Rainbow Promise Poet Haiku

Instant Telegram

View the mountain peaks,
So majestic in the sky.
Climbing a great feat.







Poetry Title: Instant Telegram

Poetry Contest Deadline: Wednesday, March 16, 2016 at  12:00:00 AM
 
 Sponsored by: Nathan D. 

Contest Description:

 Haiku poetry form : 5, 7, 5.

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Deborah Burch January 10, 2017 at 10:38 PM Nicely done!! Rainbow!! Big Hugggs. Deb

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis February 23, 2016 at 4:12 PM sharp gem you've penned.

C T February 19, 2016 at 12:06 AM looks like a winner. CT Rainbow Promise February 20, 2016 at 1:00 PM Thanks C.T. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the encouragement which not only makes me hopeful for the poem, but life itself. Best wishes,RP.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 18, 2016 at 3:25 AM - Beautiful haiku, Rainbow :) - Good luck ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Rainbow Promise February 18, 2016 at 8:42 AM Thanks Anne Lise, hugs too. There are only ten places, a hard fight. I do need your good luck!

Poet Destroyer A February 18, 2016 at 12:56 AM Rainbow Promise, wonderful imagery, beyond beauty in a telegram. enjoyed. LINDA Rainbow Promise February 18, 2016 at 8:44 AM My fellow poet, I imagined looking down from that mountain top! Glad to send a telegram from up there that you could enjoy. Best wishes to you.

Tim Smith February 17, 2016 at 11:39 PM I like the multiple meanings. Well done. Rainbow Promise February 18, 2016 at 8:48 AM Thanks Joseph, hope you enjoyed the imaginary view from up there too. Glad my telegram appealed to you. Best wishes, RR. Rainbow Promise February 18, 2016 at 8:46 AM On each line I tried to tell a story in this very short poem. Glad you liked it Tim. Thanks for the "well done" hugs, RP.