Inspiring Rainy Day

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The oyster's shell of succulent dawn 
Burst open a suppressed exhalation yawn. 

They had waited on the beach 
To see the amber sunshine reach, 
Huddled beneath a blanket each.
In their nude feet they walked. 
They kept silent, with hands locked. 

Darken clouds nudge intruding 
leaving the day brooding. 
Sweet brine whiff encouraged, as they listen.
Falling gracefully rain glisten.

A smile pulled at both their lips 
Beneath umbrella they shared rain nips.
Rain resonating deep into the ocean,
Sand, and the lover's soul emotion.

11/10/2022

Inspiring Rainy Days Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Date: 11/18/2022 7:52:00 AM
Eve, a big CONGRATS on your win with this LOVELY, romantic poem. Janice
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Date: 11/13/2022 11:38:00 AM
A lovely, romantic write, Eve... Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 11/13/2022 10:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... a romantic and lovely feeling, Eve :)
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Date: 11/13/2022 5:07:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on you TOP win, Eve.
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Date: 11/13/2022 2:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win, Eve
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Date: 11/12/2022 8:31:00 PM
This certainly is inspiring, Eve. wonderful poetry..Harry
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Date: 11/12/2022 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations on taking first place in my contest. You created such beautiful poetry, full of analogies and lovely rhymes.
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Date: 11/11/2022 8:37:00 AM
The very opening of the poem is on a grand note. Succulent dawn like an oyster's shell opening with a yawn.... a very fanciful image ! All the Best Eve ....
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Date: 11/11/2022 7:43:00 AM
Much inspiration you convey throughout, Eve. Beautiful imagery of a rainy day. Best to you.
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Date: 11/11/2022 6:07:00 AM
Oh Eve your poem is just lovely and l love the picture…Enjoyed…Debx
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Date: 11/11/2022 1:06:00 AM
Sublime description of a rainy day with a hint of romance makes us enjoy the poem all the more. Hugs.
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Date: 11/10/2022 11:44:00 PM
Romantic setting, Eve:)
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