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Inspiring Rainy Day

The oyster's shell of succulent dawn 
Burst open a suppressed exhalation yawn. 

They had waited on the beach 
To see the amber sunshine reach, 
Huddled beneath a blanket each.
In their nude feet they walked. 
They kept silent, with hands locked. 

Darken clouds nudge intruding 
leaving the day brooding. 
Sweet brine whiff encouraged, as they listen.
Falling gracefully rain glisten.

A smile pulled at both their lips 
Beneath umbrella they shared rain nips.
Rain resonating deep into the ocean,
Sand, and the lover's soul emotion.

11/10/2022

Inspiring Rainy Days Poetry Contest
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Canerdy Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Eve, a big CONGRATS on your win with this LOVELY, romantic poem. Janice
Deschler Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 11:38 AM
A lovely, romantic write, Eve... Congratulations on your first place win!
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 10:40 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... a romantic and lovely feeling, Eve :)
Pandit Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 5:07 AM
Back with BIG congrats on you TOP win, Eve.
George Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 2:58 AM
Congratulations on your first place win, Eve
Horsman Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 8:31 PM
This certainly is inspiring, Eve. wonderful poetry..Harry
Poet Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations on taking first place in my contest. You created such beautiful poetry, full of analogies and lovely rhymes.
George Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:37 AM
The very opening of the poem is on a grand note. Succulent dawn like an oyster's shell opening with a yawn.... a very fanciful image ! All the Best Eve ....
Pandit Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 7:43 AM
Much inspiration you convey throughout, Eve. Beautiful imagery of a rainy day. Best to you.
M  Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 6:07 AM
Oh Eve your poem is just lovely and l love the picture…Enjoyed…Debx
Buhagiar Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 1:06 AM
Sublime description of a rainy day with a hint of romance makes us enjoy the poem all the more. Hugs.
Daniel Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 11:44 PM
Romantic setting, Eve:)
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