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Inspired Response (A tribute to DG)

Why am I thinking 
Of ice cream melting like snow 
On seas of our tongue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/13/2010 9:02:00 PM
Aww, I love this, I imagine it to have a wonderful romantic story behind it!
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Date: 11/13/2010 7:28:00 PM
beautiful poetry and really enjoyed it a whole lot. Have a great weekend.
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Date: 11/13/2010 6:37:00 PM
Catie, even in jest you are an excellent reader, for the tongue is a concrete symbol of the voice, you have found a key ... now decode ice cream, snow and seas ... but remember things only melt when there is a temperature difference (so is there fire?). This is part of my experiment in less is more, and so using symbols I can with thin ice make eternity beneath our feet. The tribute is to DG because her Haiku suggested the less is more idea. Thanks for the reading
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Date: 11/12/2010 3:01:00 PM
Enjoyed this one..The analogy is great..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..I was delighted that you enjoyed reading my work about the Sparrow...Sara
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Date: 11/12/2010 12:21:00 PM
A fantastic flight of imagination with these nice images, David
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Date: 11/12/2010 9:01:00 AM
Deb will really get a kick out of this, David! And when I'm ready to spend a week at sea (have the money, that is), I'll be sure to let you know. It's truly my dream to live on the ocean. Thanks for your comments. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/11/2010 1:12:00 PM
Because we are silly old fools with hearts still full of wonder and romance ;) Soup mail (Thanks so much for your marathon of readings!)
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