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Premiere Contest Winner Inspired by Raphaelesque Head Exploding by Salvador Dali

    emptying of the mind into the ether
contained reverberations
   sent suddenly skywards
            firmly rejected by gravity
      bounce back for the haunting 
         we live on with the fallout

        truth ruins the illusion of necessity
spittle ruins the illusion of beauty
 you can't rewrite ripples caused by history
    only bury the dead on loop
        then repeat the mantra of moving on

      there is beauty still
  in the bright light before nothing 
         that lingers on the retina
     becoming layers
          light that needs slivers of insanity
                    to fill the gaps
              but gaps to separate the insanity

         nothing is new
   as evidenced by what is etched in stone

coffee cup stains 
    create self made crowns 
 in those faraway hideouts
          the uncut planners 
 never lose a drop 
      or burn their tongue

               their hum murmurs on
          in the perfect world they build

    everyone else gives their all
        to fulfil whatever dream
  they need to be sold 

         in the inner workings of every dome
  rest the chorus of lives that built it
             silently watching on
      mouths agape

bridges shatter between downcast eyes
everything wriggles
         finds its way
   once again to a finish line
        for a fresh wave
 as inevitable as the first
          in this thirst for glory

          in every direction lay the fallen
      leaving spaces
for the glorious mourners 
        to preach their refrains
  eventually no fight or song will be left 
only moistened air descending
   kissing your cheek 

        light and sound fade
  atop mountains
     thoughts of mortality are shushed
        legacy leaving its mark
 to echo into a final slowed motion silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 6:29 PM
"only moistened air descending kissing your cheek " !!
Hind Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 6:29 PM
congrats, also <3
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 4:15 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
G  Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 8:21 PM
Thank you Sara :)
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 8:29 AM
It’s really hard to know how much one can extrapolate from a Dali painting LG, but it’s easy to see why this one is a trophy winner, and a stunner for sure, my favourite line (their hum murmurs on in the perfect world they build) is so expressive of this piece, but the whole Ekphrasis stands up to scrutiny and resolves itself into its own stand alone legacy, congratulations! cheers David
G  Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 7:20 AM
Cute! :)
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 12:47 AM
So after my slow motion silence of yesterday, I came back and faved today, not because you dared me, but because it deserved one lol!
G  Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 1:44 PM
In your scrutiny I trust! I dived in to this one with all the throttle I could muster - Dali was magical in his conviction when in it for the art alone. Go on, fave it - I dare you!
Empress Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 7:18 AM
I faved it three times gosh
G  Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 7:44 AM
keep on twiddlin' them thumbs Skiddly-dee-da-dum-dum! :) ha better mention the "three fave" is button pressing enthusiasm and still equates to one fave lol - the blisters are real though hahah
Empress Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 7:17 AM
Theres a softness and a delicateness to your word weaving here dear LG. Im just dreaming away as i read this stunning piece that flows in such a seamless manner! I absolutely love the way you write metaphors and phrase things. You are truly one gifted poetess. And must i quote the lines! Like "coffee cup stains create self made crowns in those faraway hideouts" i recently started drinkin coffee and my heart is not liking it. Hahah hello trophy bagger! Keep owning them! This one deserves framing and faving and more!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!
G  Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 7:42 AM
Celebrating with a Tia Maria Ink :D feeling all breezy and can hear Benson Boone playing by the pool - he was amazing live :) the mellow is settling in nicely haha. This is one I'm most proud of as I dared to step outside my comfort zone but wrapped it in elements I adore - Dali needs all the latent knowledge threads to be pulled on. I was pleased with that coffee cup line, think it's unique to my interpretation :) thank you so much for stopping by to support - the cameraderie on soup is a blessing :) all good vibes :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 2:58 AM
You certainly went below the layers with your interpretation of the painting LG. Its worrying though with all the despots in the world with their fingers on the red button ready to create millions of exploding heads. Hope you're having a great time. Tom
G  Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 3:32 AM
Thanks Tom - it's lovely and relaxing here in Spain, if a bit breezy! Despite the years that pass, there seems to be no change from our dangerously close position to ultimate end via the ego driven power hungry. This painting really is a masterpiece - so much going on but serene beauty still able to distract to a degree! Thank you for stopping by :)
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