Inspired By Gaia

Rays of sunlight awaken and skies of sapphire inspire, when mother lies back with eyes veiled, breathing out life and breathing in spirit. She is the fertile earth and boundless sky. She glides through eternity, rising and falling. Her hair, once the color of midnight, now shines silver like beams from the full moon, and the stars encircling her, illuminate creation, igniting dreams and enchanting sleepless nights. As we, who no longer walk barefoot upon the earth, busy ourselves, forgetting to lift our eyes in witness to her majesty and her beauty and her grace. Our hearts still beat in unison with her essence. Beneath the stars, we walk upon the same dusty earth as our ancestors. The sky rumbles all around us with echoes of the past, and in stillness, she feels the knees of the forgotten pressed against her chest giving thanks for her nurturing breath. 


spirits veil her eyes -
drifting through sapphire sky
constellations align
 


*Haibun form inspired by Susan Seddon Boulet’s Gaia 
(for Debbie Guzzi’s Free Verse, Prose, Haibun Contest, 11/1/2014)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/7/2014 11:27:00 PM
such beautiful inspiring poem... :)!!!! congratulations!
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Date: 11/7/2014 9:53:00 PM
This is inspiring stuff Rhonda! Loved it so much, well done
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Date: 11/7/2014 4:16:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, You delivered a beautiful other world life with wondrous images in this creation of yours. It was a pleasure to read. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day. Keep up the great work. Take care. Earl
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Date: 11/7/2014 3:59:00 PM
Very well done Rhonda. Your Haibun was very enjoyable to read. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/7/2014 7:08:00 AM
Great write and win....Congrats
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Date: 11/4/2014 10:34:00 AM
A gorgeous Haibun. This will do very well in Debbie's contest. This is my first exposure to your poetry. I loved it and will fave it as my first. I hope I find time to read more.
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Date: 11/2/2014 8:08:00 PM
Wonderfully written with winner spelled out clearly Rhonda!#7
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Date: 11/2/2014 2:27:00 PM
Very delicious creation...I enjoyed it with your idea...Best wishes to you from India...
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Date: 11/2/2014 11:30:00 AM
Beautiful write Rhonda.....well penned...
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Date: 11/1/2014 11:02:00 PM
my my my, what a beauty! I noticed you were commenting to someone and wanted to see you again So glad you have this new one up!!
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