Inspired by Celestial Pablum by Remedios Varo

 we siphon the sky
       with mouths closed
          except for feeding
          every element of the construct
          is breakable
         if I just had room to manoeuvre 
      but once the ground disappears 
 the steps outside become just a shape  

               I imagine every which way to fall
          most endings lead to discomfort 
                   I could start simple
                invert the crank
                      take the food from your lips
                  scatter it for foraging 
             see if stars grow
                      in between the stones

all my simple starts
lead to complexity I can't control
but I can't sit here
       just turning the wheel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:51 AM
Omg is the crescent in a cage? Wow!!!! Thats my lover! I am feeding him! Hahah omg i love that artpiece !!!! Wow🌙
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 1:00 AM
To be precise i am feeding him chaos! Poor crescent! Can we have this as an ekphrasis prompt?
G  Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:54 AM
😅 too funny! Maybe we are all fed and all feeders 🫣
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:23 AM
I want to look up the painting but I am too high on life! 😂 I trust your vision! You are the queen of Ekphrasis!
G  Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:49 AM
You only need highlight and right click on the title 😅 https://www.book530.com/painting/125528/Celestial-Pablum.html it's very beautiful - you should see!
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:22 AM
" see if stars grow in between the stones" what even did you just say! Seriously! You keep leaving me in awe! I am trying to recover from migraines ~ sipping ice americano! Got a love injection! Haha and I am high! But what? Gosh! You really leave me speechless with some of the things you weave in your poems! "all my simple starts lead to complexity I can't control" this is me 👀 so i wonder, must I just not start anything? And just sleep when it kicks in🥹 fave!
G  Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:52 AM
No no put that Americano down! I'm pleased to hear you're recovering from a migraine and have a dopamine hit 🥰 I can't advise if the simple starts shouldn't be started - we'd never get the stars growing between the stones if we didn't 😅🥰
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August 1, 2026 at 3:39 PM
The painting is a wonderful surreal absurdist piece of work, and your Ekphrasis has only served to elevate it into the conscious mind, I mean we could stop feeding the monster and see if throwing the food (stardust) on the ground changes the picture, good things might grow between the stones, or maybe just weeds, but one thing is certain you give this mind food for thought, powerful stuff, cheers David
G  Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 6:44 PM
Well if it isn't David Kavanagh! Is my poem genie shaped, as it's granting my wishes to see you in my comment thread 😅 the painting is amazing - it kind of subverts everything but leaves it open to interpretation. I think the scene depicted is definitely calling for a bit of shaking up as no one is happy with it even if it perhaps becomes the most successful means to achieving a goal. Being fed using a perfect system but being caged and trapped in the process is definitely the process defeating the aim! I do like the idea of the stars growing where they are sprinkled though and the moon can then forage (and be happy like a free range chicken!) - who knows! (Non of us!) But breaking out of the mould seems worth trying 😊 thank you for stopping by with your insightful logic 😊
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