Mick Talbot Poet Blank verse

Inspired By Catie Lindsey - Don'T Follow Dreams Chase Them

DON'T FOLLOW DREAMS
CHASE THEM
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Don't follow dreams, chase them!
You will see it in their eyes,
those words, a true lovers score!
One day in your eyes it will be branded!
Loves passion will be truly yours.
To hear those words, I LOVE YOU!
Be mine be, be my ever loving!
Your one reply 'I love you too'!
Our love, we wish on you,
48 years still forever true!

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Emile Pinet February 5, 2018 at 1:56 PM The author uses good imagery and maintains a poetic flow throughout the whole piece. Well written with poetic imagery and style. Nice flow of words attracting the reader with their simplistic beauty. Emile. Mick Talbot February 6, 2018 at 12:37 PM Emilie, Thanks most dearly for such a wonderful critique, best forever wishes... Mick

Arturo Michael February 5, 2018 at 11:58 AM Hi Mick... " You're living a dream " Conceived... and born a reality... Right here in your little poem of love... A dream made true... Mick Talbot February 5, 2018 at 12:26 PM Thank you kind Arturo, I sincerely hope the dream does come true! Mick