Inspired By Ancient Poem: Ii
After a cleansing rain, the open plains reveal:
no sign of contaminating dust.
Clearly visible now:
emerald peaks rising behind hills.
The city gate enclose:
willows watered by the creek
bordering fields yet to be plowed.
With the advent of spring,
it is now time to sow and toil.
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