Inspired By a Song

you see what's on my mind 
can you tell my love is real 
i think of ways to explain 
but it goes down the drain
i try to grab them back 
but the skills i lack 
this is all so wrong but it feels so right
sitting here thinking of ways to fight
to win your love back 
but it shoves me out the way 
back tracking of things i did wrong 
trying to fix anything i see out of place
i did everything i could 
but it never come out right
i want to be the one that stays in your life
but my heart tells me i'm not that right
so what do i do from here
do i stay or leave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 11:16 AM
A passionate write. If you love him let him fly; one day he'll fly back in your arms.
Rich Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 7:02 PM
Really enjoyed your write and will read more of it. If you have not checked it already please take a look my new poem titled criminals part 3- thank for the read and enjoy your day.
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