Inspired

A divine rhythm seeks us
Our pristine, porous, childlike heart reciprocates
Without fuss

No thoughts decoy
Inspiration never abates
What joy

Love’s kiss
At heaven’s gates
Bliss

A divine rhythm seeks us 
Inspiration never abates
Bliss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Anaya Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Beautiful words chosen, what a great minuchi, US. Congratulations on your top win! Happy Holidays to you and yours, may all your wishes come true. ~Anaya
Seeker Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Anaya ~ wish you happy holidays with close ones
Volumes Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 11:05 AM
A wise and well written, Minichu, with the last stanza falling into place so perfectly as a wonderfully formed message. Just the way I believe Minichu's are meant to be. This is truly worthy of being a winner. Congrats.
Seeker Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 6:47 PM
Than you, dear SV :)
Empress Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations Seeker, on your well deserved win, very well crafted minichu, wishing you beautiful holidays.
Seeker Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 6:47 PM
Thank you, dear IE ~ wish you an enjoyable festive season and a happy new year
Poet Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend. All the best wishes for a happy holiday season and new year
Seeker Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 7:48 AM
Thank you, SP ~ wish you joyous celebrations with loved ones
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 4:05 PM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, Yes this poem inspires. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 11:17 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, YOu are swelclom e. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Seeker Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 9:19 PM
Thank you, Darlene :)
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