Inspire

Indigo moon
Nestled in night clouds
Silvery light blooms
Painting night owl
In the treetops 
Ready to fly
Eager to watch dinner from the sky

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Michael Tor

Date: 1/3/2025 6:47:00 AM

Lovely Acrostic Karen, lovely scene the Night owl waiting to fly for dinner great theme and imagery here. Enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing...

Moon Harp

Date: 1/2/2025 4:01:00 PM

This is an excellent acrostic, well done. I see that you use color words effectively in your poetry.

Karen Jones
Date: 1/3/2025 12:49:00 AM

Moon Harp it is a bad habit. I feel my poem isn’t dressed properly without color. Thanks for embracing my weirdness lol.

Regina Elliott

Date: 1/2/2025 1:55:00 PM

Hi Karen, I love bird poems and this one is enchanting. Happy New Year! :)

Karen Jones
Date: 1/3/2025 12:47:00 AM

Thanks Regina and Happy New Year!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/2/2025 5:57:00 AM

Great imagery, Karen. Happy New Year.

Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2025 7:35:00 AM

Thanks Victor! Happy New Year!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/31/2024 7:57:00 AM

Clever and fun. Also pretty. Thanks for your visit.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/31/2024 3:44:00 PM

You’re welcome and thank YOU. Happy New Year Richard!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/30/2024 6:53:00 PM

I truly relate to this poem. My house has trees and many owls. Thank you for the reminder that there is silver beauty in the night.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/30/2024 6:57:00 PM

Aw thanks for reading and your kind comment Hilda!

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 12/30/2024 2:39:00 PM

Hello Karen, I could swear after reading your lovely poem this morning I wrote a comment, not sure where it went. Beautifully written, my friend. Happy New Year to you and your family.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/30/2024 4:16:00 PM

Thanks for reading Zurich and happy new year