Inspiration Minichu - A Wisdom's Pray

Beautiful use of metaphors, you excel at this! Warmest congratulations on your well deserved trophy win, Hiya!

Sweet Hiya, you weaved inspiration into a beautiful Minichu. Wonderfully done.

Congratulations on your trophy win!!! Ah! How exciting! And well deserved as always! Your fourth one and definitely not the last! Minichus are not the easiest but you’ve nailed it. I think this form is not my cup of poetry lol. I seem to not get it right ever. Im so happy for you! Keep shining

Back with hearty Congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win, dear Hiya.

Nice, accented in rich tones, Hiya. Much enjoyed, my friend. Aloha, William

Whoah, this is a lot better than mine; I adored the images in this. "And stars, carve sagas, bright, scars" amazing!

I’m a feathered ocean…intriguing imagery!

great lines and really well put together words, feathered ocean, weaving light, great write Hiya

This is a highly effective Minichu composition, replete with visuals and analogies, Dear Hiya. Your use of intriguing metaphors is consistent with your style; this one, too, is allegorical and employs lovely imagery. You rhyme so well and the final lines glide effortlessly. Best wishes for the contest

Well composed minichu with great use of metaphors and imagery. Best of luck in the contest Hiya. Tom

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this entry with us. Sara K

I'm a feathered ocean.. nice line dear Hiya... you always use interesting metaphors and this one as always is metaphorical and has nice imagery like rivulets sing in mauve might... it rhymes well and the last stanza flows very well.. good luck in the contest dear..

Ah so good to see you try minichu angelic star’ and as always in your unique and creative way youve described how you find inspiration from faith and all thats around, life and scars all that which gives you inspiration is so beautifully written. I love your choice of rhymes and also how you’ve written “ stained with inspiring hearts of lost souls, weaving light, life's potion“ that depicts so much in such an eloquent manner. “ And stars, carve sagas, bright,scars” how catchy is that! I love it