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When did I write such a sad line? . No date and therefore can’t recall what circumstances prompted me that from my pen such grim words fall. Here’s one about the weather, yes. So often foggy days occur. On sunny days my words are light. Grayer days, dark thoughts bestir. The Poem The fog lies low in my valley. * It’s bearing so hard on my soul. I’m tangled today in a cobweb of gray, a fly in an upside down bowl. Trying to climb from the darkness, I’m reaching for holds that aren’t there. Befuddled and on the floor huddled, just needing to breathe lighter air. Darling, you’ve taken the sunshine. I’m struggling to find my way home. Burdened by fog of my spirit, I’m lost in this gray catacomb. I pray the sun throws off his blanket and brightens my day with his shine. There… now I have written a poem from finding that one single line. *Inspirational line By: Joyce Johnson 9/10/11 A no. 1 among many For Carol Brown’s contest “Pieces of paper…A poet’s heart”

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Date: 9/21/2011 10:23:00 AM
It's very interesting how you organized your stanzas. It sounds like a diary this way and also you can put them in two different poems if you would want to. It could seem as you find pieces of paper that you wrote in different times of your life and then put them together like this. Beautifully done. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:37:00 PM
Congrats on 1st Place, Joyce. Nice going. Thanks for your recent comments. luv Ralph
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Date: 9/19/2011 6:38:00 PM
Very good cousin Joyce, you have nailed great words as if by choice... and given voice....excellent
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Date: 9/19/2011 5:08:00 PM
I always rather like sad poems, Joyce, and I loved this one. Many congrats on your big win : )
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:35:00 PM
That is a beautiful poem inspired by the line, amazing. Congratulations on your first place win. It's an honour to share that place with you. I am sharing with so many skilled poets, thank you for including me. Lee
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:40:00 AM
CONGRATS JOYCE ON A GREAT FIRST PLACE WIN WITH WONDERFUL WORDS MY FRIEND..LUV.
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Date: 9/19/2011 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 2:30:00 AM
It's such an intense poem that I wonder why you can't remember what inspired it, Joyce. Perhaps it was a memory you chose to cast aside. I do that sometimes too. Carol is going to love this one just as I do. Wishing you success always, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/11/2011 8:57:00 PM
You did it Joyce, a winner for sure with this great rhyme. You gently take us from gray to light in a special way. Nicely done!
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Date: 9/10/2011 7:54:00 PM
oh a rare beauty Joyce..setting the tone of the contest so perfectly my friend..good luck with this treasured lines luv..
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Date: 9/10/2011 2:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for supporting my contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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