Insouciance a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

INSOUCIANCE
interstellar
   interest
&applause
serene
  surreal
prolific
&genteel
from
dark
 &ominous
deep
shadows

 influenced
by disaster
 a recurring theme
of
tsunami
a catastrophe
 enlisting
a monumental series
of tradition
 decimated

 narratives
 from inception
a
 focus
on  release
a fusion
 working together

opportunity to
 conceive
 to present
 a different order
 to
be different
to pauses
&
think  afresh

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