Insomniac's Bliss

Lillies dance on my eyelashes 
While Mars bounces on my belly 
Freedom surpassing the skies 
Clouds bring me visions of heaven

Water abundantly springs life 
Milk nourishes my soul 
Honey drops streams of sweet
Memories in my bowl

Eyes never rest on this body 
Imagination paints trees of music 
Melodious hymns of green grass and daisies 
Sing 'life is good' so use it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 7/30/2008 9:22:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem - it flowed very well - Blesings
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Date: 7/30/2008 4:45:00 AM
What a wonderful imagination as the imagery here is clear and alive. The flow of your words is smooth due to the rhyme scheme and the read is perfect. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 7/29/2008 10:51:00 PM
Well, I am having a bit of insomnia right now myself, but do not feel quite as happy as you do about it. This is so light and delightful and a pleasure to read. Seems you will drift off in no time with thoughts like these. Love your imagination. Sweet dreams. Love, Shar
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