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Insomniac's Bliss

Lillies dance on my eyelashes While Mars bounces on my belly Freedom surpassing the skies Clouds bring me visions of heaven Water abundantly springs life Milk nourishes my soul Honey drops streams of sweet Memories in my bowl Eyes never rest on this body Imagination paints trees of music Melodious hymns of green grass and daisies Sing 'life is good' so use it.

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Michael Jordan

Date: 7/30/2008 9:22:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem - it flowed very well - Blesings

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/30/2008 4:45:00 AM

What a wonderful imagination as the imagery here is clear and alive. The flow of your words is smooth due to the rhyme scheme and the read is perfect. Very well written. Michael

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/29/2008 10:51:00 PM

Well, I am having a bit of insomnia right now myself, but do not feel quite as happy as you do about it. This is so light and delightful and a pleasure to read. Seems you will drift off in no time with thoughts like these. Love your imagination. Sweet dreams. Love, Shar