Insomniac Eyes

The canvas of my mind
Is clouded by 
The foggy haze 
Of insomniac eyes
  My once rational
Thoughts becoming
More disjointed. 
 My tired soul aches while
Searching for peace, it’s been looking
For since the day it was born.
  The bags under my insomniac eyes
Are the constant reminder  
   Your work isn’t done. 
You still have to be a parent,a care giver, 
a housekeeper,a chef,lawn care guru,
wonder women with a 
super man smile and the catchphrase
”OF COARSE I CAN DO THAT” 
and the good old back up”I’VE GOT THIS” 
    The backs of my eyelids look  
so comfortable 
as I stare into the abyss of darkness 
I can never fully reach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/8/2018 10:48:00 AM
Jessica, nicely done. I enjoyed reading this is my life it seems.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/3/2018 8:52:00 AM
An accurate depiction of what many mothers and fathers experience as they raise their children and eventually serve as caregivers to their parents and other loved ones. Well done, Jessica.
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Date: 11/14/2017 10:14:00 AM
Dear Jessica: How true about non-sleep! Leon
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