Insomniac

sweating like a thoroughbred
leather bound in bed
whipped flesh turning red
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 25, 2011 at 5:50 PM
What a view Robb.. I am an insomniac for sure.. I seem to never sleep... no sweating.. the leather bound in bed sounds interesting..luv.. flesh turning red if Ron is next to me..haha.. good one luv..
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March 24, 2011 at 3:21 PM
Nice descriptive words (sweating, whipped). The horse comparison works very well!
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