Insomnia Blues April 3

Insomnia Blues Writing Com 

O Dark hundred hours 

04 a.m.

You got the insomnia blues
Nothing works
You can’t sleep
You stare at the ceiling.

Your mind plays an endless tape
Of gloom, and doom
worries and fears
all night long.

the latest dark
 SF series you saw
The latest scary headlines
endless possibilities play out. 

the latest news of war 
the latest news about the stock market  
about the endless pandemic
Dancing across your mind’s internal eye.

What if I have COVID>
What if have Cancer?
What if I have big Alzheimer’s
What is the stock market wipes me out?

What if the North Koreans invade Seoul?
Where would we go to escape the invasion?
What if the zombie apocalypse starts?
What if, what if, what if……

You stare at your watch.

4:01 a,m.

You try to sleep, but nothing works
The dark thoughts continue to play
Across your mind’s eye
Tormenting you, torturing you. 

4:05 a,m. 

You debate whether 
To give up
Get up 
Start your morning routine.

4:10 a.m. 

You give in
And try to sleep
Checking the time
Every few minutes.

Perhaps you might
Get a few fitful hours
Of much-needed sleep
Most likely not.

6:30 a.m. 

Until day-break
Blasts you awake
As the dawning sun
Fills the room. 

You get up
Having had only two hours of sleep
That is the curse
Of the insomnia blues. 

write a poem about sleep (or insomnia)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 5/9/2022 2:39:00 AM
I’m there. Rarely there, but there today, perfectly timed to be amused by this piece. Have a great day! I plan to be very cranky. ~mo
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