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Insomnia

The sun shines on your 
Dark eyes 
Pale face 
Blank mind
Veiled emotion 
This is the aftermath of deprivation 

The moon sparks up your
Overrun mind
Burdened by today's thoughts 
Reminded of yesterday's emotions
Revisited by last year's memories
Tempted by next year's ambitions 
This is you...deprived

crydeepdepressiondreamgoodfree verse

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Skat A

January 23, 2016 at 9:16 PM

EMMY:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~

Emmy Weatherill

January 24, 2016 at 7:32 AM

Thank you very much!! I was so excited after hearing that it's featured on the home page! X X

Poet Destroyer A

March 8, 2015 at 1:12 PM

Emmy, thank you for the wonderful reply...LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

March 8, 2015 at 5:33 AM

Emmy, thank you so much for the wonderful reply... LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 7, 2015 at 11:55 AM

- Welcome to P Soup, with your first poem Emmy - Always nice to meet new "poets" - I look forward to more write from you in the future - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :))

Emmy Weatherill

March 8, 2015 at 1:18 PM

Thank you very much Anne-Lise, I've had many lovely welcomes here and I really appreciate it! Thanks again and I'll be sure to check your poems out :)

Poet Destroyer A

March 6, 2015 at 3:11 AM

EMMY, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Emmy Weatherill

March 7, 2015 at 2:49 AM

Thanks so much Linda, I've found that this website is perfect to share my ideas because of the kind comments I've received already! Thanks again Em :)