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Insomnia

a star shines sweetly; my sleepless eyes watch its path across frosty window

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/22/2014 7:03:00 PM
Why don't you try counting those sheep you have described in some of your other haiku entries?
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Linda Jackson
Date: 1/23/2014 11:12:00 AM
They make too much noise. Best wishes Linda x
Date: 11/17/2013 9:55:00 AM
Great Haiku. Great subject.
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Date: 10/23/2013 2:57:00 PM
very nice indeed ;}
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Date: 10/15/2013 6:18:00 PM
gorgeous!
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