Insomnia

a star shines sweetly;
   my sleepless eyes watch its path
   across frosty window
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 7:03 PM
Why don't you try counting those sheep you have described in some of your other haiku entries?
Jackson Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 11:12 AM
They make too much noise. Best wishes Linda x
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 9:55 AM
Great Haiku. Great subject.
Duncan Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 2:57 PM
very nice indeed ;}
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 6:18 PM
gorgeous!
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