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Date: 6/3/2023 12:22:00 PM
Great penning Kim! Love the alliteration… I just love this. Going into my favs, Pangie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2023 5:48:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Pangie! :)
Date: 6/1/2023 6:58:00 AM
Hi Kim, We all have those fitful nights every now and then. You described it so well here. Try a big bowl of cereal with milk before retiring. Milk has melatonin in it and helps induce sleep. Have a wonderful day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2023 6:59:00 AM
Thanks for the tip!!
Date: 5/31/2023 7:27:00 PM
You've got the idea... For more tips, my 24/6 number is 1-800- Nos - leep
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2023 7:52:00 PM
LOL! Slept much better last night!
Date: 5/30/2023 10:24:00 AM
Great solution for those who suffer from insomnia. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2023 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! Thankfully I slept much better last night. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/30/2023 4:55:00 AM
The traits of insomnia you captured painfully nicely, Kim. The last line says it all.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2023 5:26:00 AM
Toss’n turn like a salad! Thanks, Subimal!

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