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Insomnia

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Romios Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Great penning Kim! Love the alliteration… I just love this. Going into my favs, Pangie
Rodrigues Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 5:48 PM
Thank you so very much, Pangie! :)
Kaufman Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 6:58 AM
Hi Kim, We all have those fitful nights every now and then. You described it so well here. Try a big bowl of cereal with milk before retiring. Milk has melatonin in it and helps induce sleep. Have a wonderful day.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 6:59 AM
Thanks for the tip!!
Wolf Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 7:27 PM
You've got the idea... For more tips, my 24/6 number is 1-800- Nos - leep
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 7:52 PM
LOL! Slept much better last night!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Great solution for those who suffer from insomnia. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 6:33 AM
Thank you, Victor! Thankfully I slept much better last night. Hugs ~ Kim
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 4:55 AM
The traits of insomnia you captured painfully nicely, Kim. The last line says it all.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 5:26 AM
Toss’n turn like a salad! Thanks, Subimal!
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