Eve Roper Poet Questionku

Insights Into Behavior Depression

friend in dark place 
cold walking along 
why can they see the light


10/18/2019

Poetry Contest: Get in touch with your Zen  
Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux
How Many Syllables.... 4-5-6 syllables

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Elaine Perrin November 13, 2019 at 3:04 PM Congratulations x

Richard Lamoureux November 3, 2019 at 7:51 AM Congrats on your win in my contest. I think you meant can’t in the last line. If not for that small typo this would have been a first place entry. Blessings Rick.

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2019 at 8:09 PM Congrats for your win, Eve. Hope you are having a peaceful day.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 2:09 PM - Congratulations on your great "Zen" line - Well done, Eve :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball October 19, 2019 at 11:53 PM Excellent piece Eve. I know someone like this and I often wonder what I can do to help her break free of her darkness and confusion to see the light. Bravo. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2019 at 2:03 PM provocative one, Eve. I really like this.