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CHANGE by Ian Munywe upon his visage boasts sweat,industry an upheld virtue. firm stature is exhibited,hard labour an accepted custom. a time for toil yearns,wheat and other victuals for the future. every stride to strive in burning heat,a quest out of perpetual penury. feelings of disillusionment eminent,in the brink of a huge fall. life such a baffling puzzle,everyday hustle inevitably knows no end. a new dawn presents opportunity,quite in a rush for elevation. an orison heard audibly,benedictions befalling a mortal. reverted in such haste such distaste,it were best in prior times. a new sense of belonging looming,adaptation of wanting predisposition. amidst all the experience,hardly a thought in modesty lines. amnesia having set in,pristine of new life in no time. integrity eroded ferociously,candidacy annihilated in totality. how mankind does change, indeed swiftly we tend to forget. RISE by Ian Munywe two sides of a divide collide inside,audibly voicing their thoughts. optimism reverberates severely,realism ricochets as quite a formidable term. resounding trials too eminent,life manifested in a perplexity of events. too many fish upon this vicinity,evidently not enough room to fry. by all means he shall triumph,by any means necessary. hard gravel swept over by dust,feet shuffle upon tough earth. mallets bash into rigid steel, potrait of his new born remains sole solace. all efforts to reap this here season,barren yield begets unknown anguish. a sojourner already on course,in vehement search for a new start. by all means he shall triumph,by any means necessary. wary he tranforms worn he conforms,glimpse of the past vision of the future. feet now trod upon all rugged earth,all adorned in strapped sandals. steel once too rigid little too hard,antiques and ornaments an eventuality. henceforth sight of new territory such insight,cite so picturesque a gaze in awe. by all means he shall triumph,by any means necessary.

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Date: 11/29/2014 11:07:00 PM
Hi IAN, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 11/23/2014 5:18:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ian - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/21/2014 8:06:00 PM
Hello Ian, this is a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/21/2014 10:18:00 AM
"Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on an avatar or name to go to anothers poems. Leave a comment and that person will have a permanent link back to your works... Keep writing... I would have liked to read what brought about these statements and descriptions... Story by story... I feel...Each line developed... would make each a great poem.
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Carol Eastman
Date: 11/21/2014 10:19:00 AM
I believe you have a lot to say...
Date: 11/21/2014 3:44:00 AM
Welcome Ian
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