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Insight In Custody

Love, these days were so dark
Frequently rain kissed the ground
This is the moment when mellow tries to embark
Right after the thunder shouts, echoing its mighty sound

Love, these days I sink into numbness
Blank pages haunt my enthusiasm
Chasing days without any sense, am I getting dumb?
Or is it just reality which tried to sabotage the poet's paradigm?

Love, these days I sit behind the rain
My mind was occupied but remaining behind a closed curtain
I forget how to start, hypnotized by haze
Insight in custody, I trapped within this phase

Special thank's to Debbie Guzzi :D

Copyright © Yanny Widjanarko | Year Posted 2013

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/27/2013 6:27:00 PM Seems the weather is captivating us today. I enjoyed rain kissed poem. Login to Reply Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/27/2013 6:36:00 PM Thank you Rick :D, It always been rainy days out there, I also miss the sun, just like you :D - hug, yanny

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/27/2013 3:29:00 PM [mellow tries][I sink into numbness][blank pages haunt][Or is it just][Love these days I sit behind the rain/My mind is occupied, remaining behind a closed curtain/I forget how to start..][I'm trapped within this phrase? or phase?] Wonderful content just wonder work on the verb tenses. Light & Love Login to Reply Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/27/2013 4:45:00 PM Thank you Debbie, :) i fixed it already, glad that this poem is not strange anymore in grammar hahaha :D- hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/27/2013 12:09:00 PM Strange to think that the weather has as much to do with how we feel. - A very good poem my friend Yanny. - I hope the sun will shine on you in the new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/27/2013 2:56:00 PM Thank you Anne, but sometimes rain makes my mood but unfortunately this time is not that strong :p, hopefully next time i could do better :) - hug, yanny