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Collage by Suzanne Delaney

Insight

I stare at the sky 
lost in the swirling motion
wind driven clouds hurry past
open hearted sigh,
large as a wide, blue ocean
here in this garden's leaf cast. 

1/12/16
Sedoku  Modern
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

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Gauthier Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 5:44 AM
Love "lost in the swirling motion" ~ conjures a lovely feeling of being in the moment
A   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:10 PM
Hi Suz,, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -
Delaney Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:12 AM
Thanks PD I appreciate you visiting my work. Much love, SuZ
A  Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 10:37 AM
SUZANNE, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**
Delaney Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 3:53 PM
Thanks SKAT: Always a joy to hear from you. SuZ
Scars Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Suzanne, thank you for being a part of my contest! Be blessed *smiles* -luloo
Delaney Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Thanks Laura for the high placement. Cheers, SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 8:10 PM
well done for the modern sedoka. I sure enjoy seeing this form!
Delaney Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Thanks Andrea: This is the first time I tried a Sedoka. Fun trying new forms. SuZ
Callus Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 5:02 AM
I love it, Suz...both the lovely content, imagery, and the insightful title! gl in the contest. ~ Regards // paul
Delaney Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Thankyou Paul: Your support always warms my heart. SuZ
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