Insight

I wonder...what they see when they see me 
true perception is everything but our flesh can be deceiving  
but, the eyes don't lie so maybe it's the endless 
possibilities they can't see within me that makes 
these women pass me by, do they know though
why I...chose to just admire their beauty and keep it moving
the reality is my insight saw nothin that said
"approach this woman she's worth pursuing"
But on the other hand what does my eyes say to them
why didn't they approach me...people tend to live out their 
present based on past experiences so da concept
of true love actually coming to them is slim to none
timing is everything so maybe we'll cross paths again
but aye maybe not...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Tugaff Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 9:49 AM
Well-crafted piece of art. Thank you for sharing. Ernilando
Bathsheba Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 8:07 AM
I lke the thought process thats going on in this write Corey - You have some interesting points - Fab share -:)
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